Welcome to my page here is my first poem....hope you like it

-------Redemption The Love------

Today i felt, am loosing track
Way i chose was a maze
Wanna go back but lost the trace
Am i sleepy or am i awake
Is it same heart or is it a fake

There is dark obstructing hope
Thunder and rain making me cold
Am Keep breathing but loosing control

There you come as sunshine
Holding my hand and dragging me out
Thousand things i didn't say
U r my heart beat n u r my breath
Are you n angel or tinker bell

You keep burning n hurting me
Keeping the distance redeeming me
I don't wanna loose n i don't wanna lie
Shadow of my heart still desire
You r the one and you r that fire

Being close you make me feel
I m clear n i m complete
Don't ever left n don't say good bye
You r the one that my heart desire