Joined: 24 Nov 07
here's mine,i wrote it last night and its my first one
doesnt have rhyme
Another sorrowful day
can’t hide my pain this time
oh,how it suffers my heart
i’m so restless in this life
it feels like it will never end
and i’m so sad tonight,
slowly dying inside...
i feel i’m drowning slowly and painfully
i’ll just let my depression take over
i’ll cry myself to sleep willing to die
all hopes and dreams shattered
by words told carelessly in the cold night
he yells and shouts,that’s all he ever does
doesn’t he know what damage insults can cause?
i shake,but his mean words won't get to me
i promise i wont show my weakness
but inside my pain olny goes deeper
the pain,the everlasting pain...
death seems to be the easiest way out
do i still want to fight for this hollow life?
give me a glass with poison,i won’t hesitate
he’s world would be better without me
cause he will lose the one he despises
and i will lose the one that i loathe
i feel like a tortoise
going nowhere at speed,
i feel like a prisoner
who'l never be freed,
i feel like an athlete
whose last in the race,
i feel like a victim
whose in the wrong place,
i feel like a problem
that cannot be solved,
i feel like a tablet
thats slowly dissolved,
i feel like a candle
thats long burned out,
i feel like an ice cube
thats started to melt,
i feel like a purse
that holds no money,
i feel like a joke
that no one finds funny,
i feel like a star
that never shines bright,
i feel like a bird
that cannot take flight,
i feel like a boat
thats destined to sink,
i feel like a pen
thats run out of ink,
i feel like an object
thats stashed in the loft,
i feel like the chocolate
that never got scoffed,
i feel like a ball
thats never been kicked,
i feel like an option
that nobody picked,
i feel like a human
that doesn't belong,
i feel like i'm living
a life thats all wrong!!!!!!!!!!
Joined: 14 Dec 07
Boy at the Window
Seeing the snowman standing all alone
In dusk and cold is more than he can bear.
The small boy weeps to hear the wind prepare
A night of gnashings and enormous moan.
His tearful sight can hardly reach to where
The pale-faced figure with bitumen eyes
Returns him such a God-forsaken stare
As outcast Adam gave to paradise.
The man of snow is, nonetheless, content,
Having no wish to go inside and die.
Still, he is moved to see the youngster cry.
Though frozen water is his element,
He melts enough to drop from one soft eye
A trickle of the purest rain, a tear
For the child at the bright pane surrounded by
Such warmth, such light, such love, and so much fear.
Joined: 23 Mar 08
What life means....it has no meaning
It is senseless and at the same time very profound
Sometimes it keeps you up with the clouds and
sometimes you are down in the ground in a grave
Life throws problems on you on purpose to make
you lose your sense of living.
The sense of being a human loses your mind
Empty space gathering inside where once your soul dwelled
The life is being driven out of your body like the seconds
of the day you wait for until one day your seconds are up
and you are out of this world
The time drives your mind, your mind drives your emotions,
your emotions drive your soul.
When the time comes near, when the days draw near,
life calms down and lets you breathe your last few breaths.
No regrets should be with you at that point
Waiting for you is the hardest test that God has put upon me
If my love is so, we will be together one day
and then no one will be able to break us apart....ever
These times without you near me will be hard,
but I'll pray to God each and everyday to make things right
what once went wrong -
Because you have my soul...
S*****m:sometimes i feel like i can fly all the way 2 the sky. sometimes i dream and ur my sky, sometimes i look in ur eyes and C how pure U R, sometimes U make me nervous with the way U R, a hug from u means 2 me, that im protected and not cold. a kiss from u just makes me feel like i found gold.its funny that sometimes i say mean things 2 u but in reality...... the only thing i think of, is U
Joined: 11 Aug 08
Here's the one I wrote after departing from my beloved friend...
Memories are treasured in hearts n souls
Of friends n people who possess eminent roles
In life; n of people who endeavor their very best
To convert the weary heart into a heart of zest
Their love, their care, their help n support
Every praise, every blame upsurges the rapport
These allies, these friends, although, miles apart
Till the farewell breath, reside in the heart...
Joined: 16 Oct 07
here's something short i wrote
Stand proud and tall
My heart is bleeding
Bullets for blood
This is my own life
"TAKE ME AWAY"
My heart is screaming..
I made this in October 2002 :
Look at this seashore
so plain and windy
The wave is so kind
they sing a song for me
Look at the Death
running around me
He's so kind
He don't want to take me
This is another happy day
A blade on my hand
Bloods all over me
I stare at the Death
He said silently
This post was written on a mobile device.
Joined: 9 Oct 07
What's going on in this world? Do you feel what I feel?
When sisters got raped, and brothers got killed
If u're happy with this, so where's the pleasantry
Cannot feel the freedom in their own country
Ironic, every time they go outside they're panic
Defending from such a behavior of satanic
Suddenly tear's running down my cheek
But it's nothing, compared to their efforts to speak
I heard another news, another place, another pain
Remain, as I watched the TV again
Raping rights of those innocence
I mean, c'mon man.. how come they find bliss in ignorance
While, they have no place to lean their back
While, others still continue attack
Some are agreeing the military invasion
Now what they need isn't just our compassion
(c) Fafa 2006
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